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Sunday, June 23, 2019

Searching For Safety, poem

In fear loaded times
Will a mask
That blends with all
Does not claim sides
Speaks of nothing
Stands for no one
Keep one safe?
To walk in crowds
Or hide behind doors
Doing nothing
Offending no one
Make us loved?
And where to hide
When a voice roars
Or first bomb drops
In a corner
School or mall?

Marta
04/25/2017

https://hellopoetry.com/martacweeks/
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