A site for creative expression.: Last Breath

Sunday, April 09, 2017

Last Breath

My poem, Last Breath, just started trending on Hello Poetry. Hope you go in and check it out, like it and share it. Would love comments and even critiques.

http://hellopoetry.com/poem/1918302/last-breath/

Last Breath

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